Monday, March 21, 2011

Henry V 'once more unto the breach'

Once more unto the breach, dear friends, once more,
Or close the wall up with our English dead.
In peace there's nothing so becomes a man
As modest stillness and humility,
But when the blast of war blows in our ears,
Then imitate the action of the tiger.
Stiffen the sinews, summon up the blood,
Disguise fair nature with hard-favoured rage.
Then lend the eye a terrible aspect,
Let pry through the portage of the head
Like the brass cannon, let the brow o'erwhelm it
As fearfully as doth a galled rock

O'erhang and jutty his confounded base,
Swilled with the wild and wasteful ocean.
Now set the teeth and stretch the nostril wide,
Hold hard the breath, and bend up every spirit
To his full height. On, on, you noblest English,
Whose blood is fet from fathers of war-proof,
Fathers that like so many Alexanders
Have in these parts from morn till even fought
And sheathed their swords for lack of argument.
Dishonour not your mothers; now attest
That those whom you called fathers did beget you.
Be copy now to men of grosser blood,
And teach them how to war. And you, good yeomen,
Whose limbs were made in England, show us here
The mettle of your pasture; let us swear
That you are worth your breeding- which I doubt not,
For there is none of you so mean and base
That hath not noble lustre in your eyes.
I see you stand like greyhounds in the slips,
Straining upon the start. The game's afoot.
Follow your spirit, and upon this charge
Cry 'God for Harry, England, and Saint George!'




1. Find and Highlight where these techniques are used:
Repetition
Inclusive language
Alliteration
Metaphor

2. Answer the following Questions (use quotes where applicable):

What characteristics does King Henry say are best for men in times of PEACE?
Modest, stillness and humility.
What should men be like in war?
They should be tough and strong in battle and should not be afraid of anything." when the blast of war blows in our ears, then imitate the action of the tiger.Stiffen the sinews, summon up the blood, disguise fair nature with hard-favoured rage."
What does Henry say about the English and their ancestors?
That they have fought many battles with many lives lost "Whose blood is fet from fathers of war-proof"

What does he mean when he says 'Be copy now to men of grosser blood.'?
He means to be like their fathers: strong, brave and noble and win the war.

What is Henry saying you have to become in order to be successful in war?
You have to be like an animal and have no fear.

Sunday, March 20, 2011

Othello (Act I sc iii) - Lago

IAGO-


It is merely a lust of the blood and a permission of
the will. Come, be a man. Drown thyself! drown
cats and blind puppies. I have professed me thy
friend and I confess me knit to thy deserving with
cables of perdurable toughness; I could never
better stead thee than now. Put money in thy
purse; follow thou the wars; defeat thy favour with
an usurped beard; I say, put money in thy purse. It
cannot be that Desdemona should long continue her
love to the Moor,-- put money in thy purse,--nor he
his to her: it was a violent commencement, and thou
shalt see an answerable sequestration:--put but
money in thy purse. These Moors are changeable in
their wills: fill thy purse with money:--the food
that to him now is as luscious as locusts, shall be
to him shortly as bitter as coloquintida. She must
change for youth: when she is sated with his body,
she will find the error of her choice: she must
have change, she must: therefore put money in thy
purse. If thou wilt needs damn thyself, do it a
more delicate way than drowning. Make all the money
thou canst: if sanctimony and a frail vow betwixt
an erring barbarian and a supersubtle Venetian not
too hard for my wits and all the tribe of hell, thou
shalt enjoy her; therefore make money. A pox of
drowning thyself! it is clean out of the way: seek
thou rather to be hanged in compassing thy joy than
to be drowned and go without her


Highlight where the following persuasive techniques are used:

Repetition
Alliteration
Extended metaphor

Answer the following questions using quotes where applicable:

What extended metaphor is used in this speech? Is this metaphor positive or negative towards women? Explain.
"Put money in thy purse". It is negative towards women because it shows that Iago only thinks about women as an object and he can make Rodrigo get Desdemona 
How does the metaphor related to Rodrigo becoming more proactive in his pursuit of Desdemona?
He is trying to persuade the villain Lago to stop Othello from being committed to Desdomona.
How does Othello characterise Othello ('the moor')?
By being an undesirable person who Desdemona will eventually change her mind about him.
How does Iago describe Rodrigo being passive? What will he do to himself if he doesn't act?

Thursday, March 17, 2011

The Merchant of Venice: Act IV sc i - Portia


Portia: 


The quality of mercy is not strain'd,
It droppeth as the gentle rain from heaven
Upon the place beneath: it is twice blest;
It blesseth him that gives and him that takes: - A person who is giving mercy and a person who is receiving mercy.
'Tis mightiest in the mightiest: it becomes
The throned monarch better than his crown; - If you give mercy you can be better than the King
His sceptre shows the force of temporal power, -          
The attribute to awe and majesty,
Wherein doth sit the dread and fear of kings;
But mercy is above this sceptred (King hold a stick) sway Rule of domination which is the King
It is enthroned in the heart of kings
And earthly power doth then show likest Gods strong than earthly power
And earthly power (Power that you can only do on Earth) doth then show likest God's
When mercy seasons justice. Therefore, Jew,
Though justice be thy plea, consider this,
That, in the course of justice, none of us
Should see salvation: we do pray for mercy;
And that same prayer doth teach us all to render
The deeds of mercy. I have spoke thus much
To mitigate the justice of thy plea;
Which if thou follow, this strict court of Venice
Must needs give sentence 'gainst the merchant there.–Portia is saying if the court takes their pound of flesh then they will be committing jai

Find and highlight these techniques in the speech:

Metaphor
Alliteration 
Repetition

Questions:

How does Portia describe mercy? How important and powerful is it?
She describes mercy as "gentle rain from heaven" It is quite powerful because she is saying that mercy should be given to the merchant.
What can one achieve through mercy?
If you give mercy to others one can achieve forgiveness from God. 
How is religion part of this speech? (You need to do some thinking on this one.
Religion is part of this speech because it refers to Jewish people and other religious people who believe in God. Portia says that God would forgive their sins if they were merciful towards others.

Monday, March 14, 2011

English Speech Draft 3

Lachy Wallis was a hyperactive and cricket loving boy who was just eight years old but just weeks from dying. If he did not receive a liver transplant soon he would die. His own father was being tested as a live liver donor. Then the call came that a liver donor had been found and Lachy would be able to go into an operation almost immediately. The news was miraculous and within a few short weeks his life was saved. If you were given the chance to save a life such as the life of this innocent child wouldn’t you donate your organs?
Every year on average 740 livers are saved by organ and tissue donations. Their life stories are still being written instead of being cut short. I have come to persuade you today that everybody in this room must become an organ donor. The demand for organs significantly surpasses the number of donors everywhere in the world. In 2010, 309 organ donors gave 931 Australians a new chance in life. There are more potential recipients on waiting lists than organ donors, and sadly on average every year 100 people lose their lives because they do not receive an organ or tissue. But there are also many lives that are saved every year thanks to selfless donations.
Many people have doubts about organ donation but don't let your religious views prevent you from doing what you know is right. Many Jewish people are putting aside their Jewish laws of organ donation to donate their organs as medical transplantation methods have improved and many Jewish people know that it is the right thing to do.
Organ and tissue donations save lives every year and Lachy Wallis' story is one of many.
And it is not only the recipients of the organs and tissues but it is also the donors of these precious gifts that have amazing stories to tell. Such as Time Lodder who was nineteen when his life was cut short in a car crash. Tim and his family had already discussed that they would donate their organs when the time came and when it came for Tim no one hesitated. Tim’s donation of his organs saved five lives and although his mother Margaret was saddened by the loss of her child she knew that her son’s wishes were being honoured.


I would like to say that the positives of giving an organ donation far out ways the negatives. Everyday people live are being saved and you can be a part of that. What would you do if you needed a kidney donation, wouldn't you want someone to donate?

Reflection Statement

I chose to take the side of becoming an organ donor as both my parents who are very influential in my life are both organ donors. I also chose my side based on personal and social morals. I feel that it is irrational to go against the idea on not becoming an organ donor and is in today’s society unnatural to not become an organ donor. Becoming an organ donor is also an important issue today and science and medicine are increasingly important in this field of work.
The speech uses many techniques such as rhetorical questions. This technique makes the audience think about what I am saying, it catches their attention and it engages them so not to make the speech boring or to make people day dream. For example ‘If you were given the chance to save a life such as the life of this innocent child wouldn’t you donate your organs?’ Another technique that the speech employs is emotive language. This technique appeals to the audience’s emotion and makes them feel sympathetic about organ donations. It also impacts upon the audience. My speech also incorporates true stories about organ donation and donors. This gives the audience and true fact and some real meaning as it shows the importance of organ donations. I used true stories twice within the speech once with Lachy Wallis and another with Tim Lodder. The speech also uses formal register which demonstrates the importance of the topic and that the speech should be taken seriously. My speech will also have high modality so that I can persuade the audience that my point of view is the right one. My speech will also incorporate pathos throughout it as to persuade the audience by appealing to their emotions and giving a passionate delivery.
When I say my speech I intend to use eye contact so that I engage the audience and maintain their attention. The speed in which I say my speech will be clearly understandable and easy to keep up with. I am not going to use hand gestures throughout my speech as I do not want to distract the audience and I feel it is unnecessary. I will have a clear and great annunciation of words with a loud enough voice to be heard.

Organ Donor Draft Speech 2

Lachy Wallis was a hyperactive and cricket loving boy who was just eight years old but just weeks from dying. If he did not receive a liver transplant soon he would die. His own father was being tested as a live liver donor. Then the call came that a liver donor had been found and Lachy would be able to go into an operation almost immediately. The news was miraculous and within a few short weeks his life was saved. If you were given the chance to save a life such as the life of this innocent child wouldn’t you donate your organs?

Every year on average 740 lives are saved by organ and tissue donations. Their life stories are still being written instead of being cut short. I have come to persuade you today that everybody in this room must become an organ donor. The demand for organs significantly surpasses the number of donors everywhere in the world. There are more potential recipients on waiting lists than organ donors, and sadly on average every year 100 people lose their lives because they do not receive an organ or tissue. But there are also many lives that are saved every year thanks to selfless donations.
Many people have doubts about organ donation but don't let your religious views prevent you from doing what you know is right. Many Jewish people are putting aside their
problems that occur within organ donations can be stopped by you
 
 Organ and tissue donations save lives every year and Lachy Wallis' story is one of many.
And it is not only the recipients of the organs and tissues but it is also the donors of these precious gifts that have amazing stories to tell. 
To sum up I would like to say that the positives of giving an organ donation far out ways the negatives. Everyday people live are being saved and you can be a part of that. What would you do if you needed a kidney donation, wouldn’t you want someone to donate?

Tuesday, March 8, 2011

Organ Donor Draft Speech

Lachy Wallis was a hyperactive and cricket loving boy who was just eight years old but weeks from dying. If he did not receive a liver transplant soon he would die and his own father was being tested as a live liver donor. Then the call came that an liver donor had been found and Lachy would be able to go into an operation very soon. The news was perfect and within a few short weeks his life was saved.


Every year on average 740 recipients are saved by organ and tissue donations.Their life stories are still being written instead of being cut short. I have come to persuade you today that everybody in this room must become an organ donor.The demand for organs significantly surpasses the number of donors everywhere in the world.There are more potential recipients on waiting lists than organ donors, and sadly on average every year 100 people lose their lives because they do not receive an organ or tissue. But there are also many lives who are saved every year thanks to the selfless donations such as eight year old Lachy Wallis who was given a liver which saved his life.


 Organ and tissue donations saves lives every year and Lachy Wallis' story is one of many.
And it is not only the recipients of the organs and tissues but it is also the donors of these precious gifts that have amazing stories to tell. 


Many people have doubts about organ donation but don't let your religious views prevent you from doing what you know is right, problems that occur within organ donations can be stopped by you. 


In conclusion becoming an organ donor is the most vital thing to do as it saves many lives every year.



Reasons for being an Organ Donor

People should become organ donors as it saves many lives every year like people such as Lachy Wallis, Tony, Julie Kenett were saved by an organ donor. These stories that people have written shows the amazing people who have become organ donors to save other peoples lives:
http://www.donatelife.gov.au/Discover/Stories-of-hope.html

I have found many useful statistics on this website:
http://www.donatelife.gov.au/Discover/Facts-and-Statistics.html

There are many religious viewpoints about being an organ donor.
http://channelnine.ninemsn.com.au/article.aspx?id=300372
http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Organ_donors#Organ_shortfall

Monday, March 7, 2011

Modality- High and Low within a Speech

Modality applies to my speech because if I was to have high modality through out my speech it would make me look and sound enthusiastic about the topic that I have chosen and the side I have taken. Having high modality means that I believe strongly about the side I have taken on the topics I have chosen by using words such as "must" and "always" to say my point of view. But if I were to have low modality this would mean that I would be more tentative within my speech by using words such as "may" and "could". These words show that I am not very certain about the side I have taken and the argument that I am imposing.

Sunday, March 6, 2011

English Assignment: 3 Topics- Dot Points

Becoming an Organ Donor-

  • You should become an organ donar
  • Saves a life
  • Helps someone in need
  • Makes you feel good about yourself as you helped another person in a big way
  • Your donation could help a loved one live longer
  • If you die it would not matter to donate some of your organs to people who would need it more.
Are zoos still relevant for animal preservation-

  • Yes
  • Helps breed endangered species in a calm location
  • There are zoo keepers caring for the animals 24/7 which makes sure they are healthy everyday
  • Many tourists will be able to know more information on animals to help protect them
Primary School Children Should Be Banned From Chatrooms-

  • Are too immature 
  • They do not no the rules and knowledge about 'online predators'
  • They do not need chatrooms as they see their friends everyday
  • They should be banned from chatrooms

Friday, March 4, 2011

Nature of Task- Speaking Assessment

Nature of Task:


Persuasive texts are designed to position a point of view(opinion - thesis)


Texts that successfully persuade are usually highly emotive (emotional words + influence listener/audience emotions) and effectively balance opinions with facts (research- logos).


Persuasive texts can make sweeping generalisations (uniformed conclusion), rely on stereotypes and hyperbole and yet still seem credible.


This is because a combination of objective (facts) and subjective (opinion) information is usually used to persuade.


Careful use of repetition and high modality words(persuasion techniques) can emphatically convey the composer’s purpose if it is counterbalanced with the use of statistics, expert evidence and product/idea endorsement from authoritative sources(ethos)(objective).


Moreover, effective incorporation of anecdotes(personal story), analogies (comparison) and inclusive language (we, us, ours - include the audience) (techniques) can personalise the message and help connect the composer and their text with its audience.

CAS Swimming Carnival

Knox vs Trinity is one of the greatest CAS swimming rivalries any competition has seen. Knox and Trinity have been fighting it our with their blood, sweat and tears against each other for the prestigious CAS Cup for many decades. For too long has the Cup been in Trinity's possession, for too long have Knox boys put in all their effort but fallen short on the day and for too long Knox has been in second place. Although I remember a time when Knox would win the Cup and hold glory over Trinity but that was a long time ago.

Boys we come together once a year for the greatest swimming competition ever. Where the gladiators of Knox swim bravely against their fellow competitors for the glory of the CAS Cup. But every year there is something missing, something that would throw Knox over the line for victory once again. That is you.
I have a dream that you the crowd will cheer with all your strength and all your might for Knox and its swimmers,
I have a dream that you the crowd will be who our Knox swimmers look up to you in the stands for inspiration and determination
I have a dream that you the crowd will thrive in numbers to the CAS to over power our other competitors.

So this Thursday something will happen, Knox will retake the CAS Cup and all its glory not only thanks to our fierce swimmers but to you, the crowd who will cheer for our swimmers in their times of need. So be there when history is written and to help our mighty swimmers retake the glorious cup!

Tuesday, March 1, 2011

Martin Luther King Jr - 'I have a dream.'

I am happy to join with you today in what will go down in history as the greatest demonstration for freedom in the history of our nation.
Five score years ago, a great American, in whose symbolic shadow we stand today, signed the Emancipation Proclamation. This momentous decree came as a great beacon light of hope to millions of Negro slaves who had been seared in the flames of withering injustice. It came as a joyous daybreak to end the long night of their captivity.
But one hundred years later, the Negro still is not free. One hundred years later, the life of the Negro is still sadly crippled by the manacles of segregation and the chains of discrimination. One hundred years later, the Negro lives on a lonely island of poverty in the midst of a vast ocean of material prosperity. One hundred years later, the Negro is still languished in the corners of American society and finds himself an exile in his own land. And so we've come here today to dramatize a shameful condition.
In a sense we've come to our nation's capital to cash a check. When the architects of our republic wrote the magnificent words of the Constitution and the Declaration of Independence, they were signing a promissory note to which every American was to fall heir. This note was a promise that all men, yes, black men as well as white men, would be guaranteed the "unalienable Rights" of "Life, Liberty and the pursuit of Happiness." It is obvious today that America has defaulted on this promissory note, insofar as her citizens of color are concerned. Instead of honoring this sacred obligation, America has given the Negro people a bad check, a check which has come back marked "insufficient funds."
But we refuse to believe that the bank of justice is bankrupt. We refuse to believe that there are insufficient funds in the great vaults of opportunity of this nation. And so, we've come to cash this check, a check that will give us upon demand the riches of freedom and the security of justice.
We have also come to this hallowed spot to remind America of the fierce urgency of Now. This is no time to engage in the luxury of cooling off or to take the tranquilizing drug of gradualism. Now is the time to make real the promises of democracy. Now is the time to rise from the dark and desolate valley of segregation to the sunlit path of racial justice. Now is the time to lift our nation from the quicksands of racial injustice to the solid rock of brotherhood. Now is the time to make justice a reality for all of God's children.
It would be fatal for the nation to overlook the urgency of the moment. This sweltering summer of the Negro's legitimate discontent will not pass until there is an invigorating autumn of freedom and equality. Nineteen sixty-three is not an end, but a beginning. And those who hope that the Negro needed to blow off steam and will now be content will have a rude awakening if the nation returns to business as usual. And there will be neither rest nor tranquility in America until the Negro is granted his citizenship rights. The whirlwinds of revolt will continue to shake the foundations of our nation until the bright day of justice emerges.
But there is something that I must say to my people, who stand on the warm threshold which leads into the palace of justice: In the process of gaining our rightful place, we must not be guilty of wrongful deeds. Let us not seek to satisfy our thirst for freedom by drinking from the cup of bitterness and hatred. We must forever conduct our struggle on the high plane of dignity and discipline. We must not allow our creative protest to degenerate into physical violence. Again and again, we must rise to the majestic heights of meeting physical force with soul force.
The marvelous new militancy which has engulfed the Negro community must not lead us to a distrust of all white people, for many of our white brothers, as evidenced by their presence here today, have come to realize that their destiny is tied up with our destiny. And they have come to realize that their freedom is inextricably bound to our freedom.
We cannot walk alone.
And as we walk, we must make the pledge that we shall always march ahead.
We cannot turn back.
There are those who are asking the devotees of civil rights, "When will you be satisfied?" We can never be satisfied as long as the Negro is the victim of the unspeakable horrors of police brutality. We can never be satisfied as long as our bodies, heavy with the fatigue of travel, cannot gain lodging in the motels of the highways and the hotels of the cities. We cannot be satisfied as long as the negro's basic mobility is from a smaller ghetto to a larger one. We can never be satisfied as long as our children are stripped of their self-hood and robbed of their dignity by signs stating: "For Whites Only." We cannot be satisfied as long as a Negro in Mississippi cannot vote and a Negro in New York believes he has nothing for which to vote. No, no, we are not satisfied, and we will not be satisfied until "justice rolls down like waters, and righteousness like a mighty stream."
I am not unmindful that some of you have come here out of great trials and tribulations. Some of you have come fresh from narrow jail cells. And some of you have come from areas where your quest -- quest for freedom left you battered by the storms of persecution and staggered by the winds of police brutality. You have been the veterans of creative suffering. Continue to work with the faith that unearned suffering is redemptive. Go back to Mississippi, go back to Alabama, go back to South Carolina, go back to Georgia, go back to Louisiana, go back to the slums and ghettos of our northern cities, knowing that somehow this situation can and will be changed.
Let us not wallow in the valley of despair, I say to you today, my friends.
And so even though we face the difficulties of today and tomorrow, I still have a dream. It is a dream deeply rooted in the American dream.
I have a dream that one day this nation will rise up and live out the true meaning of its creed: "We hold these truths to be self-evident, that all men are created equal."
I have a dream that one day on the red hills of Georgia, the sons of former slaves and the sons of former slave owners will be able to sit down together at the table of brotherhood.
I have a dream that one day even the state of Mississippi, a state sweltering with the heat of injustice, sweltering with the heat of oppression, will be transformed into an oasis of freedom and justice.
I have a dream that my four little children will one day live in a nation where they will not be judged by the color of their skin but by the content of their character.
I have a dream today!
I have a dream that one day, down in Alabama, with its vicious racists, with its governor having his lips dripping with the words of "interposition" and "nullification" -- one day right there in Alabama little black boys and black girls will be able to join hands with little white boys and white girls as sisters and brothers.
I have a dream today!
I have a dream that one day every valley shall be exalted, and every hill and mountain shall be made low, the rough places will be made plain, and the crooked places will be made straight; "and the glory of the Lord shall be revealed and all flesh shall see it together."2
This is our hope, and this is the faith that I go back to the South with.
With this faith, we will be able to hew out of the mountain of despair a stone of hope. With this faith, we will be able to transform the jangling discords of our nation into a beautiful symphony of brotherhood. With this faith, we will be able to work together, to pray together, to struggle together, to go to jail together, to stand up for freedom together, knowing that we will be free one day.
And this will be the day -- this will be the day when all of God's children will be able to sing with new meaning:
My country 'tis of thee, sweet land of liberty, of thee I sing.
Land where my fathers died, land of the Pilgrim's pride,
From every mountainside, let freedom ring!
And if America is to be a great nation, this must become true.
And so let freedom ring from the prodigious hilltops of New Hampshire.
Let freedom ring from the mighty mountains of New York.
Let freedom ring from the heightening Alleghenies of Pennsylvania.
Let freedom ring from the snow-capped Rockies of Colorado.
Let freedom ring from the curvaceous slopes of California.
But not only that:
Let freedom ring from Stone Mountain of Georgia.
Let freedom ring from Lookout Mountain of Tennessee.
Let freedom ring from every hill and molehill of Mississippi.
From every mountainside, let freedom ring.
And when this happens, when we allow freedom ring, when we let it ring from every village and every hamlet, from every state and every city, we will be able to speed up that day when all of God's children, black men and white men, Jews and Gentiles, Protestants and Catholics, will be able to join hands and sing in the words of the old Negro spiritual:
                Free at last! Free at last!
                Thank God Almighty, we are free at last!


1. Summarize the thesis of the speech in one sentence.
The thesis of the speech is for all men and women, black and white to have the same rights as each other and that black people should be treated the same as white people

2. Mode of Persuasion? (it is ok to have more than one) Give examples to support your answer/answers.
He uses Logos as one mode of persuasion as he gives detailed evidence from the Declaration of Independence for example "unalienable Rights" of "Life, Liberty and the pursuit of Happiness." 
He also uses Pathos by giving a sense of powerful emotion into his speech by using repetition and metaphors for example "we've come to our nation's capital to cash a check" and "we will not be satisfied until "justice rolls down like waters, and righteousness like a mighty stream."
King also uses Ethos when he refers to himself as he has a dream for example "I have a dream that one day on the red hills of Georgia, the sons of former slaves and the sons of former slave owners will be able to sit down together at the table of brotherhood". 

3. Major techniques (highlight all examples)
Repetition is a major technique used in the speech for example he keeps on uses "I have a dream, inclusive language when he uses "we" which unites the audience, there are also many metaphors within they speech such as "hew out of the mountain of despair a stone of hope".

4. What is the historical context of this speech?
He refers to the Declaration of Independence and uses parts of Abraham Lincoln speech at Gettsburg.

5. Do you feel that this is an effective speech? (answer in a paragraph)

I feel that this is the most effective speech in America's history as it is a momentous turning point in America's history and Martin Luther King says a speech that forever changes their history.